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Cryonic
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 08, 2010 11:54 pm    Post subject: Grammar/Spelling? Reply with quote

Someone might want to go looking through the text the game presents to the user.

"The mob fall on you like wild animals, and despite your desperate fight, you a pummeled by countless angry fists. Luckily, police whistles soon ring out through the night mist and the crowd disperses leaving you battered and bruised."

Should be:

"The mob falls on you like wild animals, and despite your desperate fight, you are pummeled by countless angry fists. Luckily, police whistles soon ring out through the night mist and the crowd disperses leaving you battered and bruised."
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 09, 2010 1:00 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

On the other hand, it IS Facebook Wink
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