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Lord Lance · Posted: Tue Apr 20, 2010 7:57 am Post subject:

Can anyone revise my spelling underlined in yellow in the "Hawks > Go for the Eyes!" paragraph?
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TeknoMerk · Posted: Tue Apr 20, 2010 12:17 pm Post subject:

Lord Lance · Posted: Thu Apr 22, 2010 9:41 am Post subject:

Thank you TeknoMerk!

I almost finished the "K" chapter... Now you have KILLERS to play with!

PS: can you check for me the small yellow highlighted added part in Killer Mold?
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elf23 · Posted: Fri Apr 23, 2010 1:49 am Post subject:

It sounds a bit better with a slight re-arrangement, thus:

A hero approaching a Killer Mold must make a Notice roll to spot the Mold in time to avoid the nasty consequences of stepping into it. The Notice roll is modified by lighting conditions and other cirucmstances, as usual.

ps. Kobolds, yay! I found it very inspiring reading that entry Smile

(The dart damage is still Str + 1, old style, btw.)

elf23 · Posted: Tue May 25, 2010 3:56 pm Post subject:

Lord Lance, i just had a read through the elementals, and noticed a few minor things:

The fire elemental Body of fire ability mentioned hexes, should say squares.
In Firestorm it says "the elementals makes", should say "the elemental makes".
Strike: "A fire elementals hand to hand attack" - needs an apostrophe: "elemental's".
The water elemental's Invulnerability mentions fire elementals.
In the Tidal wave ability it mentions Str-2 damage, i'm not sure, but that looks like an old style damage rating?

Lord Lance · Posted: Wed May 26, 2010 2:51 am Post subject:

elf23 · Posted: Thu May 27, 2010 9:21 am Post subject:

Ah right, do you mean that what's in the google doc also includes some "unconverted" entries which you're in the process of working on?

Lord Lance · Posted: Thu May 27, 2010 10:59 am Post subject:

Correct, ser!

I try to fix ASAP the beasts, but sometime I skip foward 'cause I wanna fix other things first, so I end with some (rare) old style parts here and there.

PS: I fixed what you spotted. Keep the good proofreader work!
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elf23 · Posted: Thu May 27, 2010 2:48 pm Post subject:

Gotcha

Zenguy · Novice Joined: 13 Aug 2007 Posts: 20

Just stumbled upon this - excellent! Cool

Thanks LL,

keep up the good work.

Lord Lance · Posted: Sun Jul 18, 2010 8:11 am Post subject:

Hi Savages. Please, take 1 minute to read the part I wrote under the "generic" Demon description (as ever, yellow highlighted). I need a "english language check".
You can do the check even for the "Demon" special ability (no highlight there).

Thanks in advance.
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Zenguy · Novice Joined: 13 Aug 2007 Posts: 20

My $0.02:

1. I think it reads better if you drop that section (yellow highlighted) entirely, except for notes 3. and 4. below.

2. The +4 damage from holy/blessed weapons belongs in the description for the Demon special ability includes with each creature (rather than separated out up front).

3. Add something like: In some settings a special ritual or item may be used to destroy or exorcise a demon. The ritual or item is determined on a case by case basis."

4. Keep the "Final note". Suggested revision to wording: "Final note: the Demon special ability described here is different from the one given in the Fantasy Companion. Use the version which best fits your setting."

Lord Lance · Posted: Mon Jul 19, 2010 6:14 am Post subject:

Ok, I did some modifications, incorporating part of your 2 cents.
Thanks for your time, and keep watching my work in progress!
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Snate56 · Posted: Mon Sep 20, 2010 4:46 am Post subject:

Well, m'Lord, how goes the project?

Very Happy

SteveN
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jpneok · Novice Joined: 21 Sep 2010 Posts: 56

This is great stuff, I didn't even know all this was here, as I just got into SW - great system and apparently great fan support. I come from WFRP2E myself and lean more to rules-lite now and am working on a full conversion for that system to SW (I know there is an existing smaller document and maybe another being worked on) but I don't know, are there existing fantasy/medieval settings for SW? I'm really, really new to SW. I love fan-supported and shared stuff!

Emiricol · Posted: Tue Sep 21, 2010 5:18 pm Post subject:

Hellfrost and Shaintar

Lord Lance · Posted: Wed Sep 22, 2010 12:46 am Post subject:

jpneok · Novice Joined: 21 Sep 2010 Posts: 56

Wow, thanks for the info Lord Lance, those look interesting. =) And others for the info on the other settings.

Also as an aside, I don't mean to hijack the thread, but something I've been wondering, as I'm doing my conversion, in Warhammer, there are bonuses to stats and skills, when translating over to SW, is +1 more significant or "potent" as a +1 on a single die roll (like +1 to your roll) or as an increase on the die itself? I have a hard time figuring out which ups the probability more, having a static increase of a bonus to a roll, or having the actual number of sides increase. Thanks!

Snate56 · Posted: Wed Sep 22, 2010 11:18 am Post subject:

One thing off the top of my head, the increase in die type would be better because it decreases the chance of rolling a one, and thus failing.

SteveN
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