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siefertma · Posted: Fri Nov 14, 2008 12:20 am Post subject: DL Character: Spirit-In-The-Air

I picked up the Dealands Reloaded template for Metacreator, so I tried it out on the following PC:

Spirit-In-The-Air

Attributes: Agility d6, Smarts d6, Spirit d8, Strength d4, Vigor d6

Skills: Guts d8+1, Fighting d6, Tribal Medicine d6, Survival d4, Tracking d4, Healing d6, Shooting d6, Stealth d6

Charisma 2, Pace 6, Parry 5, Toughness 5, Grit 1, Power Points 15, CV 66

Hindrances: Old Ways Oath, Poverty, Vow: Fight the Ravenites.

Edges: Attractive, Arcane Background (Shamanism).

Powers: Armor, Healing.

Gear: Tomahawk: d4+d4*, Bow: 2d6, Arrow (×20).

Background: Since a young girl, Spirt-In-The-Air has shown that the nature spirits where with her. Going against tribal tradition, Spirit was taught the great medicine to help heal and protect her people. Although she was betrothed to Running Eagle, another shaman, her heart belonged to Sharpened Stone, a brave who she had grown up with. When she discovered that her husband to be was a Ravenite, she exposed him to her tibe's elders. Before he could be executed, Running Eagle escaped and returned with other traitors armed with fire sticks and iron weapons. After overwhelming her tribe's camp and killing the rest of her tribe, Running Eagle tied her to a pole to left her to die of hunger and exposure. She escaped her bounds and on the graves of her lover and her people, that she would use her powers to oppose Raven and followers.

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shadd4d · Posted: Fri Nov 14, 2008 12:55 am Post subject:

Drop the +1 from Guts. Also consider that the attractive edge is in character but you don't have a Persuasion or Streetwise skill to be affected. You end up rolling d4 and d6 both at -1 as your unskilled social skills.

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JackAce · Posted: Fri Nov 14, 2008 4:41 am Post subject:

I think the +1 Guts is supposed to be from her one point of Grit.

Also, she'd be rolling straight d4 and d6 for Persuasion and Streetwise. Her Charisma bonus negates the Unskilled penalty.

But taking these two Skills does make sense for this character. And if I counted correctly, you even have two Hindrance Points left to spend to get them.

I see a major an two minor Hindrances for -4 points

Two Edges for +4.

5 Points worth of Attributes.

15 Points worth of Skills.

It looks like you forgot the one free Edge that all Human characters get. If you declare one of your current Edges to be the free one, that will free up two Hindrance Points to spend on more Skills (e.g. Persuasion and/or Streetwise).
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siefertma · Posted: Fri Nov 14, 2008 9:55 am Post subject:

JackAce · Posted: Fri Nov 14, 2008 10:03 am Post subject:

BTW: What's "CV 66" supposed to mean?
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siefertma · Posted: Sat Nov 15, 2008 9:34 pm Post subject:

OK, I've revised the character. How's this look?

Spirit-In-The-Air

Attributes: Agility d6, Smarts d6, Spirit d8, Strength d4, Vigor d6

Skills: Guts d8+1, Streetwise d4+2, Persuasion d4+2, Fighting d6, Tribal Medicine d6, Survival d4, Tracking d4, Healing d6, Shooting d6, Stealth d6

Charisma 2, Pace 6, Parry 5, Toughness 5, Grit 1, Power Points 15, CV 66

Hindrances: Old Ways Oath, Poverty, Vow: Fight the Ravenites..

Edges: Attractive, Arcane Background (Shamanism).

Powers: Armor, Healing.

Gear: Tomahawk: d4+d4*, Bow: 2d6, Arrow (×20).
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